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Reputation parties.
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03-18-2012, 06:08 PM
(This post was last modified: 03-19-2012 06:13 PM by manadspaniel.)
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So this is because I had luck with my mini stories... (Shorst desc. cause I have to write it ALL over again...)
------------------------=Reputation 0=------------------ I've finally arrived in this little town. From the people who've been here they told me these people have an odd way of ranking people.. Not with money, but with reputation.. The better and more helpful you are the better reputation you get... Or so they say.. I began walking down the road into town. It was made of cobbled stone and had a shine from the rain.. As I walked into town, it was a beautiful sight. Buildings everywhere, people everywhere and a nice town center. I began asking around about where I could stay. Most people looked blankly at me, and kept on walking, but then there were a few who pointed me to an old dark ally. I walked in. There was a small stack of cardboard boxes set up so I could get shelter from the weather, and keep my warmth. I stared at the small shelter for a while and eventually sat down. But to an odd suprise I smelt the strongest odor, which could only come from one thing. A rotten cheese which'd layed there for years. The day quickly turned to night, and after a day of buying supplies I lied down in my "bed". The smell'd penetrated everything, so luckily I didn't notice it. As I closed my eyes a large noise from behind me startled me to awaken. I slowly looked back, seeing a... Thing stand up. It was a short little creature which seemed to have its middle fingers cut off. It had lost a few toes by it living out here in the cold. It slowly began slumping towards me. It was limping slightly, and I could see a light injury. As it closed in on me I sneezed. The sound was enough for it to stare down at me. Its expression was quite blank... So blank it looked like it never knew I was here. The face began looking even more blank when it tilted its head to the left. Now it looked so blank as if it didn't know that there was a community in this town... So blank that it probably had forgotten about this town. ----------=Reputation 1=-------------------------------- I've finally awoken. It seems like the day's gonna be good, and the weather fine! I drag myself out of the ally and see an old farmer who's fallen down and dropped his wheat. There was noone else around, so I decided to go and help him up. After I'd helped him, he was so happy that he blindly gave me a rep point. I'd finally gotten my first point! As the day went on I went around asking where I could sleep for the night.. As of many they pointed to a barn, seeing my point. I walked over to the stable and opened the door. The stable had a few beds set up, mainly consisting of hey, and some thick blankets. The structure of the building was slightly old, mainly consisting of wood. It was painted red as most barns, and was quite quiet and comfortable. I decided to pick a bed which was in a corner. The bed didn't get much light, and was perfect for a nice sleep. As more day went by I got more supplies. Mainly food, as shelter is given. As it became night I felt tired. So I lay down in my bed to try and get some sleep, but... The door opened. It was a slim... Humanoid? And had an extreme limp. The body and face were covered by a thick jacket, and his feet were swollen because of the low quality. As the night went on I couldn't sleep. So I calmly sneaked towards my roomie. Once I'd finally closed in on him I could finally see his face. The face was angry in a way. He had a short beard with a matching moustache. His eyrbrows thick, and powerful, and his whole body seemed to have gone through too much sh*t. My first impact was that he'd been in the worst places in this country, and that he'd seen way too many unfriendly people than nice. I put a piece of bread beside him, and went to sleep. -------------=Reputation 2=----------------------------- I'm young, I'm single, I'm ready to mingle.
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03-18-2012, 07:59 PM
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RE: Reputation parties.
Wait... where's rep 1?
Secret's out.
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03-18-2012, 11:56 PM
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RE: Reputation parties.
Yeah Rep Club One is an important part in any LoUder's life!
"No Excuses. No Apologies. No Regrets."
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03-19-2012, 01:51 AM
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RE: Reputation parties.
Oh, uh I'll fix that... I just wasn't in my game after losing all the text the first time.
I'm young, I'm single, I'm ready to mingle.
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